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  1. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 - Rewrite of Part 4 in progress) Nice job. That made a whole lot more sense than the previous version and I also believe it's an improvement story-wise. One thing I'm wondering about is just how great Skye's psychic range is, since she couldn't read...
  2. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 - Rewrite of Part 4 in progress) Yeah, sorry about derailing your thread. Probably shouldn't have replied to him. So far the edits look good; I like that you're adding more focus to Brendan's emotional reaction to his mother's death, and Arena Trap is a...
  3. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 - one part left!) (Playable!) Um, I appreciate it and all, but please don't try to argue in my favor with "SHE'S FUCKING RIGHT BECAUSE SHE'S THE FUCKING ADMIN WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE". Appeal to authority (or profanity, or your personal opinion...
  4. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 - one part left!) (Playable!) Constructive criticism: look it up. I'd personally much, much rather have comments picking apart the logic of my work, if it's faulty, than empty, meaningless, generic praise like "This is pretty good. Keep up the great...
  5. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 - one part left!) (Playable!) Well, I know Mars has a Purugly, but the question here is how Skye knew, when she had no prior information about the Team Galactic admins. Something that kind of bugs me about your explanations, Strife89, is that you're not...
  6. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 - one part left!) (Playable!) Hmm. Maybe I'm missing something, but I don't quite follow how Skye figured out it was Mars. For one thing it's not at all clear how she suddenly knows it was part of the Red Chain, but I guess that could be explained by her...
  7. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 in progress) (Playable!) Present Skye's profile on part 4; presumably the recap is referring to the fact that her ability to teleport is implicit in the fact she is a Kirlia. EDIT: Huh, I couldn't see Blazie's post because the forum refused to let me...
  8. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 2 in progress) (Playable!) Hmm. I must admit I kind of saw his mom's death coming - suddenly introducing a character like that and having happy fun times with her is just a little too ominous to make it shocking when she turns out dead. After all, you're...
  9. Butterfree

    In Progress Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Cases 1 through 3; 4 in progress)

    Re: Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney (Case 1 complete!) (Case 2 about to begin!) (Playable!) Hm. This works better than I thought it would when I first heard the idea. I have a few criticisms. First, "telekinesis" is moving things with your mind (hence the shared root with for example "kinetic...
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